Talk:To the Magic Store by Will Dockery/@comment-238354-20151003150344

Hello George, nice work on this page, but I found at least one word that need editing... but whether it is this old machine I'm on or another problem, I can't quickly get to "Edit" mode to fix it. Run a spell check on the first section and you'll catch it. I am also reposting this to Usenet with corrections... here is that first section as it will look there: To The Magic Store / Review by Rick Howe http://pennyspoetry.wikia.com/wiki/To_the_Magic_Store_by_Will_Dockery Will Dockery's New Poems To The Magic Store, just released by Will Dockery, is a publication of modest proportions, consisting of a cover illustration followed by seven pages of poetry. At that, there is something aesthetically effective about this simple minibook design. Having issued a series of similar books over the last several years, the author undoubtedly has acquired a certain proficiency with them. It is probably a question, since one is not sure how else to explain it, of /fitting/ or /filling/ - yet not overfilling - a book of this size with an appropriate amount of material, such that one might experience in it a satisfying ampleness, notwithstanding the smallness of its format; at the same time expression must reach completion in the allotted number of pages, and not leave the impression of having been aborted, or that necessary articulations were left out. Judicious resort to ellipsis may indeed be helpful in this regard only providing it does not signify impoverishment. (Which is not the same thing, really.) It is indicative that the book proceeds at what seems, at once, a comfortable, unhurried pace; at the same time it is more than the negligible sort of labor which one might expect in the everyday course of things to have done in fifteen minutes or so.